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Step2:listthemainpointsthesameproblemcareforeverythingmakethegenerationgapdeeperworryabouteverythingmakeusgrowuphealthilyandlivehappilymoreunderstandingbetween…Step3:makesomesentences:Wehavethesameproblem.Ourparentscareforeverythingofus.Theyalwaystelluswhatweshoulddo.Theydonotletusdowhatweliketodo.Thegenerationgapisdeeper.Thepurposeistomakeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Wearepartoftheirlife.Wecarrytheirhopeandexpectation.Weshouldunderstandeachother.Inthisway,wecangetonwellwitheachother.Step4&5:connectthesentencesandmakesomeappolishment.Step6:Copyitoutcarefullyandclearly.Proofreading(findout5errors)Ourparentsconcernabouteverythingthatwehavedone,whichmakeusannoyed.Theyalwaysworryabouteverythingandeverybody,suchasourstudy,entertainmentandfriends.Asisoftenthecase,theysometimeslookourdiarywithoutourpermit.“It’sgoodforyou.”explaintheyeverytimeweaskthemwhy.Childrenasweare,therearesomebasicpersonalrights,whichshouldbeprotected.Howtogetonwellwithourparents?It’saproblem.However,thereisnoreasonforustobeagainsttoourparentsjustbecauseofit.Onlywhenwetryourbesttocommunicatewiththemcanwemakeeachofusunderstand.It’syoursincerityandpatiencecancalltheirrespectonyou.Whynothaveatry?Suggestionsformakingourwritingoutstanding:advancedwordsandphrases;differentabundantsentencepatterns;correctconjunctions.Copy2:Whatwemustfacewithisthatourparentsalwaysgeteverythingofusundercontrol,whichmakesusfeelratheruncomfortable.Toourdisappointment,parentsalwaysworryaboutwhatweweareveryday,howwebehaveatschoolandourstudies,ourmeals,eventhefriendswehavemade.What’smore,theyoftensaythattheintensionfortheseistoletusgrowuphealthilyandhappily.Forfearoftheirfeelingsad,wehavetoactastheyrequire,ratherthansayaword.ChildasIam,Ientirelyunderstandmyparents.Ithinkthekeytoitistounderstandthem.Ontheotherhand,weshouldmakeourparentsunderstandus,either.Withthelovebetweenparentsandus,wecanleadacomfortableandsensefullife!Copy3:Itisbelievedthatourparentsalwayspayattentiontoeverythingwedo.Theymakeitarulethatwhateverwedo,weshouldtellthe