托福写作：20170916托福独立写作解析与范文.docx

托福写作：20170916托福独立写作解析与范文电脑，手机，电脑游戏：有趣，帮助孩子放松但是缺点明显，孩子缺乏锻炼，缺乏与人沟通简单玩具：益智，激发想象力，例如乐高和朋友一起玩：锻炼沟通能力，拓展社交圈Nowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology,likecomputers,smartphone,videogamesforfunandentertainment;playingsimpletoysorplayingoutsidewithfriendswouldbebetterforthechildren’sdevelopment.范文：Undoubtedly,childrentoday,asthemosttech-savviestgenerationinhistory,canhardlyliveadaywithoutcomputersandsmartphoneswhichplayanimportantroleintheirstudyandentertainment.However,asthetimechildrenspendwithdigitalsdevicesskyrockets,bothparentsandeducatorsstarttoworryabouttheperilsofnewtechnologyandadvocatethatitismoremeaningfulforchildrentoplaywithsimpletoysandmeetfriends.Admittedly,childrenacquiremuchjoyfromcomputersandsmartphones.Thewelldesignedcomputergamesneverfailtofascinatetheirplayerswithvividfigures,attractiverewards,andcheerfulmusic.Itisevenmorejoyfulwhenclassmatesareplayingtogetheronline.Inaddition,almosteverychildwhohasasmartphonewillinstallchattingsoftware.Astheyalsohavethestrongdesiretobeconnected,theykeeptalkingwitheachotherevenafterschoolonthephone.Ifthereisanythingthattheyarereluctanttocommunicatewithparentsorbrothersandsistersathome,itismorefuntochatwithclassmates.However,asthereareself-evidentdisadvantagesofplayingcomputersorsmartphones,suchaslackofexercises,pooreyesightandisolationfromrealworld,parentsandeducatorsadvocatereplacement:simpletoysandmeetingfriends.Tobeginwith,therearemanytoysthatnotonlybringasmuchjoyascomputersandsmartphonesdo,butalsohelpchildrenprovokethinkingandactivateimagination.Comparedwithcomputergameswhichrequirefewthoughtsbutsimpleexercisesoffingers,thosetoysencouragechildrentomakemoreeffortsinthegameandrewardsthemwithstrongersenseofachievement.OneofthebestexamplesmustbeLego,atoywelcomedbymanyfamiliesglobally.Withnumeroussmallpiecesofdifferentcolorspiledup,childrenareabletobuildanythingintheirmind,likeanarchitecture,ananimalandacartooncharacter.Secondly,communicationandinteractionwithfriendsisabsolutelymoreimportantinchildren’sdevelopment.Whilee