大学英语六级写作经典范文及其点评.docx

编号：时间：2021年x月x日书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟页码：大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利，又有何弊呢？看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢！SelfemploymentSelfemploymentcouldbringmanyadvantages.Oneoftheadvantagesofbeingself-employedisthattheprofitthebusinessmakesbelongstotheowner.Iftheself-employedpersonsucceedsinbusiness,hehasthechancetoearnagreatdealofmoney.Theprofitearnedistherewardfortheowner’seffort,abilityandcreativity.Thus,asecondadvantageisthataperson’sintelligenceandabilitieshaveadirecteffectontheearnings.Athirdadvantageofbeingself-employedisthatapersoncancontrolhisworkinghours.Whilenotallself-employedpeoplearecompletelyfree,mostofthemhavemorecontroloverthisareathanthesalariedpeople.However,beingself-employedisnotwithoutproblems.First,beingone’sownbossplacestheresponsibilitydirectlyonthatindividualshoulders.Everyonehassomeweaknessesinacertainaspects.Theseweaknesseswillaffecthowsuccessfulaself-employedpersonis.Second,thoughtheself-employedcanearnconsiderableprofitswithasuccessfulbusiness,lossescanforcethemoutofbusinessandsometimes,placethemindebt.Athirddisadvantageconcernsincomesecurity.Self-employedpeoplehavenoguaranteedwage.Theirearningscanvarygreatly,dependingonbusinessconditions.Salariedpeople,however,cangenerallycountoncontinuedearnings.Inaddition,salariedpeopleoftenenjoyfringebenefitsthatmeangreaterpeaceofmind.Oneofthesebenefitsmaybeinsurancepaidforbytheemployerthatcontinuestheemployee’ssalaryintheeventofsicknessoraccidentwhilemanyself-employedpeopledonothavesuchprotection①.［253words］行文点评文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创业所存在的问题。两段中“first,second,third”的使用，不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分明，更在内容上体现了连贯性。好文妙译自我创业自我创业的好处之一是商业利润归创业者所有。如果创业者生意成功，他有可能挣很多钱。这些利润是对创业者努力、能力和创造力的回报。因此，自我创业