看图作文讲评2说课材料.ppt

看图作文讲评2
下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。请根据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻写一篇120字左右的短文。
注意：可以适当增加细节，并展开合理的想象，使故事完整连贯。第一步认真看图，确立主题第三步合理想象，补出要点第三幅图：可想象他们做了除图画表现出的fish,pork外，还有没有其它菜。
比如：chicken,soupandotherdeliciousdishes.
第四幅图中没有一个人出现，为什么，留给考生进行合理的想象：李华和父亲是不是藏起来了？其目的是什么：
可能是等母亲回家时以给她一个惊喜。第四步确定时态，译出要点第一幅图
OnMarchtheeighth,Women’sDay,LiHuahadagoodideaandtoldhisfatherthathewasgoingtodosomethingtocelebrateit.Heaskedhisfathertohelphim.第二幅图
Theydecidedtodosomehousework,whichwasalwaysdonebyhismother.LiHuacleanedthehousecompletely.Hisfatherdidsomewashing.第三幅图
Theymadeagoodmeal,cookingfish,pork,chicken,soupandsomeotherdeliciousdishes.第四幅图
LiHualaidthetableandsetavasefullofflowersinthemiddleofthetable.Theyhidthemselvesbehindthedoor,waitingforMother.Theywantedtogiveherahappysurprise.Whenhismothercamebackandsawdeliciousdishesanddrinksonthetable,shefeltverycuriousandhappy.第五步连句成篇，过渡自然参考答案Thentheymadeagoodmeal,cookingfish,pork,chicken,soupandsomeotherdeliciousdishes.LiHualaidthetableandsetavasefullofflowersinthemiddleofthetable.Afterthattheyhidthemselvesbehindthedoor,waitingforMothersoastogiveherahappysurprise.Whenhismothercamebackandsawdeliciousdishesanddrinksonthetable,shefeltverycuriousandhappy.Thefamilyhadapleasantfestival.Seeyoulater!
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