（包头专版）中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作02 观点建议课件-人教版初中九年级全册英语课件.pptx

【典型例题】[2018·包头]
假设你是李华,你班同学上周就“Howtogetrelaxed”这一主题进行了讨论。请你根据讨论的情况写一篇总结。内容包括:【思路点拨】
一、审——圈要点、定时态、定人称
二、列——短语(尽可能为习惯用语)
·Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…
·communicatewithourparentsandfriends
·dosports
·listentomusic
·gotothemovies
·travel三、加——加主语,修饰词;定人称(第一人称)、定时态(情态动词)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。
Wearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.
Wemustdosports.
Weshouldlistentomusic.
Wecangotothemovies.
Iliketraveling.四、连——添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯——保证基础平均分
上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…
Wegotalotofwaystorelax.
Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.
Also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.It'sgoodforourhealth.Atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.Itcanmakeusrelaxed.
Besides,wecangotothemovies.However,Iliketraveling.
Inaword,learninghowtogetrelaxedisnecessary.
五、美——表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活
避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。[及时体验]
Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…
基础句Wegotalotofwaystorelax.
升格句Herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.
Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.
发展句Sothatwecangetonwellwiththem.
或Ifwecommunicatewithourparents,wecangetonwellwiththem.基础句Also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.
升格句Thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.
发展句It'simportanttokeepushealthyandenergetic.
基础句Atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.
发展句Listeningtobeautifulmusiccanmakeourbrainsbetterrest.
基础句Besides,wecangotothemovies.
升格句Wemayalsohavemanyothermeaningfulactivitiessuchaslisteningtomusic,goingtothemoviesandtraveling.
基础句However,Iliketraveling.
发展句Iprefertraveling,becauseIcanlearnmoreknowledgeoutsideclass.六、查——典型病例(参见话题一)
七、洁——书写定天下!
Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed.Herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.
Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentssothatwecangetonwellwiththem.Besides,asfarasIknow,thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.It'simportanttokeepushealthyanden