高中英语写作策略学习.doc

Book4Unit1Womenofachievement

PeriodFour:Writing（“高分作文”必备攻略）
Step1：牢记英语优秀作文的评价标准：
1.“齐全”：写作的全部信息点需要包括在文章中，不可遗漏；
2.“准确”：符合英语的语法规范，尤其要注意人称和时态的正确使用；
3.“顺畅”：前后内容符合逻辑，有适当的过渡词，做到篇章结构连贯；
4.“高级”：适当使用“高级词汇”和“高级结构”，做到词汇丰富、句式多变。
Step2：必备策略一 选词策略
Whichwordisbetter?“优”词“劣”词？然后做出选择并思考英语作文中选词的策略。
1. (1)TodaywevisitedtheGreatWallwithourteachers. ()
(2)TodaywepaidavisittotheGreatWallwithourteachers. (√)
Yourchoice:I①(①havenoidea②don’tknow)howtosolvetheproblem.
Yourreason:
2. (1)Thosemenarelessattractivetowomenfortheirlaziness. ()
(2)Thosemenarelessattractivetowomenintermsof/dueto/owingto/becauseoftheirlaziness. (√)
Yourchoice:Wemiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnhowto①(①dealwith/makefulluseof②use)money.
Yourreason:
(1)Hedidn’tgotoschoolforcoldyesterday. ()
(2)Hewasabsentfromschoolforcoldyesterday./Hiscoldfailedhimtoattendclassesyesterday. (√)
Yourchoice:Asweknow,wateris②(①important/②essential/significant)toourlife.
Yourreason:
(1)Shehuggedhimwarmly. ()
(2)Shethrewherarmsaroundhimtogivehimawarmhug. (√)
Yourchoice:Hiswifesaidcoldlyand②(①angrilyclimbed/②stormed)upthestairsandrushedintoherroom.
Yourreason:
总结1：高中英语习作的选词策略概括起来就是1、名词优于动词；2、短语优于单词；3、高中词汇优于初中词汇；4、形象生动优于抽象空洞。

Step3：“选词策略”运用
1、出生于......
bornin.../comefrom.../hisbirthplaceis...
2、对......有浓厚的兴趣
showagreatinterestin.../goinfor.../havegreatlovefor...
3、在......奉献某人的一生
devoteoneselfto.../hiswholehearted/extraordinarydevotionto...
4、被认为是......
beconsideredto.../beregardedas.../bethoughtas...
5、被授予；获得
beawarded.../winmanyawards
6、因......而受到尊敬
behonoredfor.../berespectedfor.../winone’srespectfor...

Step4：利用所学标准给这位同学的习作打分
Step5：必备策略二 常用过渡词(体现文章前后的逻辑关系，确保文章连贯)
逻辑类别精华过渡词1、举例1.Forexample,句子；2.suchas+名词短语；
3.take...forexample2、列举1.Foronething,….Foranother,….2.First(ly),….Second(ly),….Third(ly),….3.Firstofall;Besides;What’smore/What’sworse;Lastbutnotleast.3、转折1.However,….;2....while+从句;
3.Onthecontrary;4.Inspiteof+名词短语4、因果1.because+从句;2.Therefore,….3.so+从句;
4.Forthis/abovereason;5.Dueto/becauseof+名词短语5、比较1.Co