雅思大作文批改实录.docx

雅思大作文批改实录

2016雅思大作文批改实录 雅思写作是雅思考试中非常重要的一部分，同时也是广大考友们必须攻克的一大难关。下面是yjbys网小编提供给大家关于雅思大作文批改实录，希望对大家的备考有所帮助。 尾段，而是检查，是自我批改和找他人批改，唯此写作才可精进。本文话题：个人努力有助环境保护 题目 Somepeoplethinkthattheenvironmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualstosolve.Others,however,believethattheproblemscannotbesolvedifindividualsdonottakesomeactions.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion. 学生习作 Nowadays,thereisaheateddebateaboutwhetherindividualsshouldtakeactionstosolveenvironmentalproblems.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.InthefollowingpartIwillanalyzethesetwodivergentideasindetailandgivemyownopinion. Somepeoplethinkthattheenvironmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualstosolve.Individualscandonothingtoimprovetheenvironment.Onlygovernmentandlargecompaniescanmakeadifference.Incontrast,othersholddifferentopinionthateachindividualshouldtakesomeactionsotherwisetheproblemscannotbesolved.Individualactions,smallastheymaybe,canberenderedmuchmoreusefulthanwerealize. AsfarasI’mconcerned,botharenotcompletelyobjectiveandIagreewiththesetwoinsomeextend.Asweallknow,ourenvironmentisfacingalargenumberofproblemswhichneedtobedealtwithimmediately.Undoubtedly,governmentsandlargecompaniesshouldtaketheresponsibilitytosolveit.What'smore,someissuesevenneedjointinternationaleffortamongdifferentboundaries.However,doesthismeanthatindividualsdon'thaveanyresponsibility?Althoughthereishugedifficultyinsolvingsomeenvironmentalproblemsforindividuals,Idon'tthinkitshouldbeanexcusefortakingnoaction.Actually,individualscandomanysmallbutpowerfulthingstohelptoimprovetheenvironment,suchasgarbagesortingbeforethrowaway,refusingtousedisposablechopsticksandsoon.Environmentprotectisnotsuchabigissuethatindividualscandonothing.Itisverypracticalanditneedseachpersontotakesomeactions. Toputitintoanutshell,protectingenvironmentandsolvingrelatedproblemsneedjointeffortofbothgovernmentsandindividuals.Everyoneshouldbeawareofitsimportance,bearesponsibleoneandtakesomepracticalactionstodealwithit.Onlyinthiswaycanenvironmentalproblemsbeensolvedass