2012届高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评三.doc

请你根据对下面漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：1.漫画描述了什么？2.漫画想要告诉我们什么？3.发表你个人的看法。注意：1.可参照图示作必要的发挥想象；2.词数150左右(开头句已给出)；3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校班级和本人姓名。参考词汇：温室greenhouseAsisvividlyshowninthefirstpicture,…1.仔细审图，提炼要点漫画描述了什么？在刮风下雨，但是生长在温室里的花朵生长得很好。花朵离开了温室，花朵不能经历风雨，很弱。2.描述图片，准确到位对漫画进行描述，内容要简明扼要，就图说图（为了表达上的连贯，有时还要增加一些要点），切忌拖泥带水；语言要准确到位，切忌闲言碎语。换句话说，我们就是要用最简洁的语言概括出漫画的主要内容。搜索表达的词组或句型windyandrainyoutsidetheflowerinthegreenhousegrowverywell(be)exposedtotheoutsidebecomeweakercan’tstandagainst译点成句，注意多重表达Itiswindyandrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell.Itisraininghard,buttheflowerinthegreenhouseisatitsbest.Theflowerinthegreenhouseisstillingoodconditiondespite/inspiteoftheheavyrain.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandcan’tstandagainstthebadweather.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandfailstostandagainstthebadweather.Whenthereisnogreenhouse,theflowerbecomesweakeasilytheflowerappearsweakandfailstostandagainstthebadweatherduetolackofprotection.完成漫画的描述Asisvividlyshowninthefirstpicture,itiswindyandrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell.Intheseconddrawing,however,thingsarequitedifferent.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandcan’tstandagainstthebadweather.现象：生活条提高了，大人……，小孩……大人：对孩子的溺爱；满足他们的一切要求；视他们为掌上明珠；……孩子：想当然地认为父母总是会保护他们的；想不到一旦没有了保护，会怎么样？……结果：孩子难以在现实社会中生存，像温室中的花朵那样容易被困难打败。搜索表达的词组或句型livingstandardsimprovespoilchildrengivethemwhatevertheywant/satisfyeveryneedofthemseethemasapplesoftheireyestake…forgrantedalwaysprotectthem/enjoytheshelterparentsprovideNeverthinkwhatwillhappenoncethereisnoprotection…havedifficultyexistingintherealworldbedestroyedbythetoughrealityaswhathappenstotheflower译点成句，注意多重表达Withlivingstandardsimproving,adultsspoiltheirchildrenandtrytheirbesttogivethemwhatevertheywant.Aslivingstandardsareimproving,adultstendtospoiltheirchildrenbysatisfyingeveryneedofthem.Parentsseechildrenastheapplesoftheireyes,offeringalltheycantoprotectthem.Childrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaysprotectingthem.Childrenquiteenjoytheshelterparent