高考英语 考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作外教旁批写作 29 试题.doc

安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2012届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（三十）简要描述图片并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。学生习作·外教批改Inthecartoon“LetGoofMe”1theboyhastoattendmanyspare_time_schools2extraclassesleavinghimtiredanddepressed.It3Thisvividlyreflectsourpresentschoollife.Ithinktoomanyafter­schoolclassesdostudentsmoreharmthangood.Weareoccupiedwithtoomanyextraclassesandendlesshomeworkeverydaywhichgivesusnotimetodeveloping4ourowninterestsandreal_abilitiestalents.Asaresultmanystudentsfeelphysicallyandmentallystressedandsomeevensufferfromnerve5nervousdisordersorpoorhealth.Nowonderabout60%ofthe6studentswearglassestoday7.Westudentsshouldnotberobbedofoursparetime.Wedesireagoldenandcheerfulchildhood.Goingtothetheatrevisitingmuseumsandjoining8insocialactivitiesshouldbecomebepartofourlife9lives.Ibelievetheseactivitieswillbroadenourhorizonsandmakeourschoollife10funandmeaningful.旁批1．这是标题每个实词的首字母都应该大写。2．这种表达方式不正确。可以用extraclasses或after­schoolclasses。3．用指示代词语气更强起到将本句与上一句联系的作用。4．这里的to是动词不定式因此动词必须用原形。只有当to是介词时后面才能用动名词即­ing形式。例如：Ilookforwardtoseeingyou.5．nerve是名词这里需要用形容词。6．复数名词表泛指时不加冠词。7．这个例子不能有效地支持作者的观点。近视不代表身体不健康也不能说明神经功能紊乱。8．and前后的动词形式要保持一致。由于前面两个动词是动名词形式因此join也应该是动名词形式。9．our后应该跟名词复数。10．schoollife泛指是单数形式不要用our来修饰。参考下面漫画请以I’maSeniorThreeStudent为题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文短文应包括以下几条要点不要逐条翻译。eq\a\vs4\al(1.简单描述漫画的内容。2.作业负担过重。3.精讲精练。4.多点自由活动的时间。)【参考范文】I’maSeniorThreeStudentThepictureshowsaboywhostaysuplatedoinghishomework.Scoresofbookspileonthedeskinfrontofhim.Therearealwayspaperswaitingtobefinishedandproblemstobesolvedseemingtohavenoending.TimeisneverlongenoughforastudentofSeniorThree.WhatIdoeverydayistolistentotheteachers’lecturestakenotesanddomyhomework.Ihopeourteacherswillhelpusgetmoreknowledgewithfewerlecturesexercisesandlesshomework.Onlyinthiswaywillwehavemoresparetimetoenjoyourlife.