高考英语二轮复习 书面表达 漫画题的写作思路和技巧指导学案-人教版高三全册英语学案.docx

漫画题的写作思路和技巧指导81.请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“WeChineseShouldCarryForwardTraditionalChineseCulture”为题，用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容：1.简要描述两幅图的内容；2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；2.作文词数150左右；3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。第一部分：描述两幅图先对照高考真题的描述图画的范文：PeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.Themessageconveyedhereisclear:“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords”.Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionsshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.一、描述图画三步骤：第一步：确定人物做了某事：图1：小女孩向妈妈庆祝圣诞快乐；AgirlwisheshermotheramerryChristmas.图2：小女孩不知道端午节的意思。AgirlhasnoideaabouttheDragonBoatFestival.第二步：添加心理InPicture1,agirlwisheshermotheramerryChristmaswithexcitedexpression,whilePicture2showsagirl,feelingquitepuzzledhasnoideaoftheDragonBoatFestival.第三步：添加主题句：Nowadays,childrenholdabsolutelydifferentattitudestowardsChineseandwesternfestivals.合并：Nowadays,childrenholdabsolutelydifferentattitudestowardsChineseandwesternfestivals.InPicture1,agirlwisheshermotheramerryChristmaswithexcitedexpression,whilePicture2showsagirl,feelingquitepuzzled,hasnoideaoftheDragonBoatFestival.比较范文：Today,youngChinesepeopletakecompletelydifferentattitudestoChineseandwesternfestivals.InPicture1,agirlisgreetinghermotherexcitedlyatChristmaswhilePicture2showsagirlisatalossabouttheDragonBoatFestival.总结：基本思路都一样的，毕竟都是模仿高考范文来的。二、概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解由于这两幅图实际上反应同一个现象：熟悉西方节日，不解中国节日，所以我们的理解要围绕原因，但不要说解决方式，因为要放在第三段的启示中写。无论什么作文思路，学会两分法，这也是我最近感悟，无非正面和反面；内因外因；或情感和理智（知识）；或自然和人类活动等等。就本文而言就是内因和外因。思路一：外因——西方文化的流行Westernculturegainscurrency;appealto…;findempathy;shapeone’sworldview思路二：内因——中国传统节日的教育缺失Thelackofeducationabout…;feeldisconnectedfrom…;erodeculturalidentity成文：Thetwopicturesserveasawake-upcallforusthattheyounggivetoohighprioritytowesternculturebutthinknothingofChineseculture.Thisisbecausewesternfilmsandmediahavegainedcurrencyi