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Writingtaskone:singlelinegraphYouwillbegivenagraphwithasingleline.Yourtaskistowritea150wordreporttodescribetheinformationgiveninthegraph.Youarenotaskedtogiveyouropinion.Youshouldspendaroundtwentyminutesonthetask.Taskoneisnotworthasmanymarksastasktwoandsoyoushouldmakesurethatyoukeepwithintherecommendedtwentyminutetimeframe.Whatisbeingtestedisyourabilityto:objectivelydescribetheinformationgiventoyoureportonatopicwithouttheuseofopinionusesuitablelanguagetodescribethegraphSampletaskYoushouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationinthegraphbelow.Writeatleast150words.Whenyou’vefinishedthetaskHowgoodisyouranswer?Checktheguidelinesbellowandreadthesampleanswer.GuidelinesforagoodanswerDoesthereporthaveasuitablestructure?Doesithaveanintroduction,bodyandconclusion?Doesitincludeconnectivewordstomakethewritingcohesivewithinsentencesandparagraphs?Doesthereportusesuitablegrammarandvocabulary?Doesitincludeavarietyofsentencestructures?Doesitincludearangeofappropriatevocabulary?Doesthereportmeettherequirementsofthetask?Doesitmeetthewordlimitrequirements?Doesitdescribethewholegraphadequately?Doesitfocusontheimportanttrendspresentedinthegraphicinformation?SampleanswerThegraphshowsthenumberofcasesofXdiseaseinSomelandbetweentheyears1960and1995.Asanoveralltrend,itisclearthatthenumberofcasesofthediseaseincreasedfairlyrapidlyuntilthemidseventies,remainedconstantforaroundadecadeat500casesbeforedroppingtozerointhelate80s.In1960,thenumberofcasesstoodatapproximately100.Thatnumberrosesteadilyto200by1969andthenmoresharplyto500in1977.Atthispointthenumberofcasesremainedstableuntil1984beforeplummetingtozeroby1988.From1988to1995Somelandwasfreeofthedisease.Inconclusion,thegraphshowsthatthediseasewasincreasinglyprevalentuntilthe1980swhenitwaseradicatedfromSomeland.Whatdoyouthink?Whatisyouropinionofthissampleanswer?Howwelldoesitmeettherequirementsoftheguidelines?Readtheteacher'scommentsonthisanswer.Teacher'scommentsonthesampleanswer“Thereportstructureiseas