高考满分英语作文.doc

全国卷I：满分范文一满分文（一）DearPeter，Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.SinceImquiteinterestedinEnglish，IwouldliketomakeanEnglishpenfriendtoimprovemywriting.Canyouintroduceonetome？Myidealpenfriendshouldbeofmyage，andaboywillbebetter.Aboywholikestravelingandfootballwillbeagoodcandidate.Inmyopinion，theguyofmyagewillsharealmostthesameexperiencesasmeanditiseasiertotalktoeachother.Wecanshareourfeelingsoftravelingandfootball.Ifpossible，Ihopethathelikespets.Hopeyoucanfindmeanidealpenfriend.Thankyou.Bestregards，LiHua名师点评：本文属于比较“平”的文章，即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词语，但是使用了一些短语和结构，能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy，比较好。Ifpossible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。积累卡片好词：1.candidaten.候选人2.sharewith与…分享好句：Inmyopinion，theguyofmyagewillsharealmostthesameexperiencesasmeanditiseasiertotalktoeachother.在我看来，像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。好处：复杂句的组合很好。满分文（二）DearPeter，Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.IhavebeenlearningEnglishfortwoyearsandIhopetofindanEnglishpenfriendsothatIcangetmoreimprovement.Canyouhelpmetofindone？Idliketohaveaboy，whoisofmyageandisfondoftravelingandsports，tobemypenfriend.Inmyopinion，peopleofthesameageoftenhavesomethingtoexchange.ThatswhyIwanthimtobeofmyage.Ifhelikesdoggy，thatwouldbebetterbecauseIcantellhimsomethingaboutmylittledoggy.Idbeverythankfulifyoucanhelpme.Hopetohearfromyou！Bestregards，LiHua名师点评：从整体上来说，本文写得还是符合要求的，内容完整，要点和结构也很齐全。语言的使用不在于华丽的辞藻而在于其一些复杂句子的组织。最值得我们学习的就是像好词和好句中列举的表达法。全文流畅而连贯，适合于模仿。积累卡片好词1.improvementn改进2.dosb.afavor帮助某人3.doggyn.小狗好句1.I’dliketohaveaboy，whoisofmyageandisfondoftravelingandsports，tobemypenfriend.我想寻找一个和我年纪相仿，喜欢旅游、体育的男孩来做我的笔友。好处：ofmyage年纪相仿；befondof喜欢。2.That’swhyIwanthimtobeofmyage，这就是为什么我希望笔友跟我年纪相仿的原因。好处：用why引导的从句做表语从句。Shouldtouriststakephotoswithanimals？Koalasinwildlifeparkscan‘tfallasleepbecausetouristskeepdisturbingthem.Themovementisthinkingtomakethetourists’behaviourillegaltoprotecttheanimals.Whenpeoplearevisitingwildlifeparks，theyliketotakephotographswithanimals.Reasonsforthisarevaried.Somepeoplemaythinktakingphotoswithanimalsarefunnyincontrastwithtakingp