雅思写作开头 考官最不喜欢这些句子.docx

雅思写作开头考官最不喜欢这些句子一、中式英语讨厌指数：★★★★★上榜理由：用中式英文开头，不仅会让考官看不懂，还暴露了你的语言功底，语料积累匮乏，是雅思写作中的大忌。比如：写作主题1：Thehappiestmomentinyourlife案例：Inourlife,therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily……写作主题2：Thepopulationproblem案例：Thepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem.Forexample,inthecitycentersofShanghai,wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.写作主题3：Istherefairnessintoday’sbusinessworld?案例：Ithinkintoday’ssociety,thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld.Forexample,IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings……二、胡乱翻译中国俗语讨厌指数：★★★★★上榜理由：胡乱翻译中国俗语会起反作用，毕竟考官对中国俗语并不“感冒”，反而会引起考官反感。比如：写作主题1：Isitgoodtohavealargefamily?案例：Ithinkitisgoodtohavealargefamily.BecauseweChinesebelieveasentence:“Manysons,manylucks”……写作主题2：Doyouthinkone’scharacterisgreatlyinfluencedbyhis/herfamily?案例：Chineseoldwordssaysverygood:Dragonborndragon,phoenixbornphoenix,rat’ssoncanmakehole……写作主题3：Theadvantageofbeinganiceperson案例：Ibelieveonesentence:“Agoodpersonisalllifesafe”.WeChinesepeoplealwayssay:“Goodhasgoodpay,badhasbadpay”.三、超级啰嗦讨厌指数：★★★★☆上榜理由：开篇就要主题明了清晰，上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。比如：写作主题1：Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?案例：Thistopicisveryinteresting.I’mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic.BecauseI’malsoacollegestudentandI’mnotmarried……写作主题2：Willmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation?案例：Ok,thistopicisaverygoodtopic.First,letmetellyouastory:Ihaveafriend,helikesgoontheinternetverymuch.Everyday,heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames.Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.四、偏离主题讨厌指数：★★★★☆上榜理由：文不对题自然会扣分，给考官留下的印象就是跑题，想想整体写作分数还会高么?比如：写作主题：Itissaidthatnowadaysonecan‘tacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?案例：Ithinktosuccess,wemusthavealotofimportantqualities.Tohavetheseimportantqualities,wemustlearnalotofthings,forexample,English,musictools,andetc.Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers,ourfriendsandfrombooks.Allinall,wecanlearnfrommanyplaces.五