索老师点题漫画式大作文范文点评修改.doc

索老师点题漫画式大作文范文点评修改索老师温馨提示：1.“小视点、大话题”的漫画是最可能的命题形式，应该说比出图表题的可能性大些！2.我所提供的三篇写作命题，都极具预测性，请同学们认真体会，潜心写作，不要口头四处传播！3.考生要注意我所提供的三篇作文的时效性，它们所蕴涵的主题思想与现今的“以人为本”、“和谐社会”等热点词是一脉相通的。索玉柱xx年1月5日于北大畅春园◇FaceUpChallengesandTestsinLife◇图画为正面命题：反映“挑战、创新与成功”的主题。◇图示如下：一些年轻人在大道上行走，前方有高耸的大学学府、研究所的招牌，但路两旁设有各种各样的考场和在座的考官。FaceupChallengeandTestinlifeAsisvividlydepictedinabovepicture,inordertoenterouryearningcollegeandobtainthecorrespondingdegree,wemustexperienceavarietyofteststhroughoutourlives.Takingatestischallengeandopportunityinthemeantime.Tosueedinourlives,wemustfaceuptestproactively.Inthefirstplace,weshouldestablishsolidfoundationduringschooltimes.[此处为倒装句]Onlywhenweequipourselveswiththemostbasicscientificknowledgewillwehavethechancetogettouchwithandgraspthehighandnewtechnology.Secondly,wemustopenourmindandhavethespiritofinnovation.Innovationiscriticaltonotonlyoneperson'sdevelopmentbutalsotoacountry'sdevelopment.Tobehaveexcellentlyinatest,innovationisthehighlight.Atlast,weshouldapplyourknowledgecorrectly.Withoutapositivevaluepoint,knowledgeisvaluelessandevencanbeharmful.Allinall,nowthattestisnotavoidable,weonlycanfindthebestsolutiontopassit.AndIthinkthattestisthemosteffectivemeansofencouraginguslearninghardandcontinuously.Sowhynotsaythankstothetest?[14--15分索玉柱评分]◇GivingUpIsAlsoNeededCourageously.◇图画为正面命题：反映“自身修养，与环境共同开展”的主题。◇图示如下：一个人放下了一个大斧头，不再砍那一颗长满果实的大树。图画的含义和寓意是：人类需要与自然环境同步开展，科学把握自然规律，不能盲目冒进，为一时的利益所左右自己。GivingUpIsAlsoNeededCourageously[修改稿]Inthepicture,apersonisputtingdownanaxeslowly,becausehedoesn’twanttocutdownabigtreewithmanyripefruits.Beforethisfatbenefit,themancangiveuphisideaofcuttingdownthefruittree.Thisactionisreallyworthyofcourage;thatis,“Givingupalsoneedscourage.”Itismuchclearerthatthedrawerattachesimportancetodevelopment,whoseimplication,Ibelieve,canbesummarizedinthefollowingtwoaspects.Inthefirstplace,inthisworld,toomanypeopletakeitforgrantedthatwecanfreelytakeanythingweneedfromenvironment.Butifwecouldn’tstopexcessivedevelopment,theearthwouldbeenothing,includingwatershortagea