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高考英语书面表达分析课件说课讲解.ppt

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2008年高考英语书面表达阅卷分析2007年与2008年高考书面表达阅卷情况比较情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：游乐园amusementpark 垃圾箱bin内容要点及细节内容要点及细节内容要点及细节内容要点及细节评卷给分的细节要求LastweekourClass1Senior3inRedStarHighschoolhadanunusualspringouting. Thedaybeforeweleft,ourclassmateshadaheateddiscussionaboutthedestinationoftheouting.Somestudentssuggestedtheamusementpark,whileotherspreferredboatingandmountainclimbing.Whenitcametopractice,wewerehavingagoodtimeclimbingatlast.However,atthetopofthemountain,wewereangryratherthanshockedtofindoutthatloadsofrubbishwerediscoveredeverywhere.Meanwhile,itcametoourmindthatwehadtocleanthismessup.Thus,afterrecyclingtherubbishindifferentbins,wewereallverycheerfulthatwenotonlyreturnedthebeautybacktothemountain,butalsohadawonderfulspringouting. Lastweek,thestudentsinmyclassdecidedtogooutforaspringouting.Someofuswantedtogototheamusementpark.Somewantedtogoboatingandsomewantedtoclimbthemountain.Finallywedecidedtoclimbthemountain. Iwasashinyday.Allofuswerehappy.Butwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain.Wefoundthatrubbisheverywhere!Wepickedtherubbishandthrewthemintothedustbin. Ithink,weshouldn’tthrewtherubbisheverywhereandweshoulddoourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Themorewedo,themorebeautifultheearthwillbe! Lastweekourclassorganizedaspringouting.Tomakethismemorableactivitymorewonderful,wediscussedthedestinationcarefullyandfinallydecidedtogomountain-climbinginsteadofotherchoiceslikeplayinginanamusementparkandgoingboating. Withhighspirits,westartedourspringoutingonafineday.Flowerspresenteduswiththeirsweetestsmilesandweweresoakedupinthewarmsunshine.However,wewereshockedwhenwereachedthetopofthemountain.Wastedbottlesandusedpackageswerethrowneverywherewhichtotallyruinedthebeautyofthenature.Feelingagreatpityforthetourists,wepickeduptherubbishandcarefullydividedthemintotwogroups：recycleonesandthenon-recycleones.Afterthat,weputtherubbishintothebindifferently. Wecallonawarenessonprotectingourenvironmentwhichisofgreatimportance.