高考英语漫画作文.docx

二．漫画类先描述图画再发表自己看法
范文：简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

内容要点：
描述文字说明：
学生被迫上很多补习班
无兴趣可言
议论文字说明：
太多的补习班是浪费时间
学习要有兴趣
家长不要强迫孩子参加补习
表达希望
（二）Onepossibleversion:
Lookatthispicture.Youwillunderstandbetter“ToomuchworkmakesJackadullboy”.Hehastogotosomanytrainingclassesbesideshisschoolclasses.Lifeisnofunatallforhim.Holidaysandweekendshavebecomedullwork-days.Heistootiredtolearntheselessonswellwithnointerest.
Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents.Theymightdobetterwhentheyshowinterestinwhattheyarelearning.Pleasedon’tforcethesestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingto,andwhenlearningisfun,surelytheywilldobetterthanweexpect!
（三）文章结构和套语：
Lookatthispicture.Youwillunderstandbetter“ToomuchworkmakesJackadullboy”.Hehasto…besideshisschoolclasses.Lifeis….…havebecome….Heis…
Inmyopinion,…formanystudents.Theymight…whenthey…whattheyarelearning.Pleasedon’t…whatthey…,andwhenlearningisfun,surely…

1）.开头：
Lookatthispicture.
Thepictureshowsthat…
Fromthispicture,wecansee…

2）．衔接句：
1.Asweallknow,…
2.Asiswell-known,…
3.Itiswellknownthat…
4.Inmyopinion,…
5.AsfarasIamconcerned,…
6.Thissightremindsmeofsomethinginmydailylife.

3）．衔接词
1．表示时间顺序：first/firstly,then,next,after,afterthat,during,throughout,before,later,while,meanwhile,atpresent,bynow,finally,intheend,atlast,atthattime,inthepast,immediately等。

2．表示递进关系：and,also,furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,aboveall,what’smore,what’sbetter,inthesameway等。

表示方位：near(to),far(from),in(the)frontof,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,totheright,totheleft,ononeside,ontheothersideof,outside等。

表示因果关系：as,since,for,so,because,thus,accordingly,consequently,asaresult,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto,therefore等。

5．表示目的：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderthat,soasto,inorderto/that,forthesakeof等。

6．表示列举和顺序关系：first,second,third,next,then,finally,lastly,afterthat,firstofall,tobeginwith,foronething......,foranother......等。

7．表示解释和说明：forexample,forinstance,thatis,namely,thatistosay,suchas,inotherwords,andsoon等。

8．表示转折和对比关系：but,yet,