专八强化写作.ppt

TEM8写作强化45分钟400字

20分议论文，论说文

写作5-6段（450字最佳）

字数规划：60字-100-100-100-40字
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熟悉指令：
Inthefirstpartofyouressayyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargumentandinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewritten
toanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,languageandappropriatness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
content:subtopicMydear:
Ireallyloveyou.
Ican'tlivewithoutyou.
Ican'tstopthinkingofyou.
Youdon'tknowhowmuchIloveyou.Mybeloved:
LoveyoumorethanIcansay.
Youaretomeaswateristofish.
Ifthepassionaterefreshingbreezeknowsmyheart,itcantellyouthatImissyou.
Idoloveyou!评分标准：

1.语法结构，动词时态（过去时）一致，主谓一致。
2.句式多变：定从，强调，状从，从句结合，被动优先。四大句型（too..to.../sothat/itis..that../..enoughto..)
3.词汇多变，用词准确（书面语）
4.拼写
书面语作文错误举例：
Lotsofpeoplethinkthattherailwaysaregettingwore.
agreatnumberofmanybecoming
majority
Youcan'talwaystrustthenumbersinthatreport.cannotThesecondthingisthatmostkidsinthatdistrictwillbecomecrinminals.
issue/aspect/pointchildren/youngpeople/theyoungergeneration
Ithink:
I：一篇文章开头结尾
Don'tusequestionsinacademicwriting.5.结构清晰（切题、逻辑性）
1)每段主题句体现中心思想，扩展句扣主题（5句：1句主题，4句论证）
2）使用过渡性词（tipically)句子之间逻辑条理
3）论据足够细节、例子（推理论据）
4）.书法：10-12字一行，蓝色
5）.标点正确（—/:对主题句有用）常见写作问题和错误类型
单词拼写错误
同义词替换不够单词重复率高
连词使用少，逻辑关系不紧密
句式过于单一
分论点过于交叉接近
论述段落开展困难
审题偏差（真题）目标？
aim
purpose
goal
target
purport
helpful
benefitial
beconduciveto学生反例作文修改
WhyPeopleAttendCollege
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