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---书面表达TointroduceChinatotheworld.
TolettheworldknowaboutChina
andChinesecultureandcustoms.为弘扬中国传统文化，增强青少年的民族自尊感，某中学生英语杂志社开设了“中国传统节日”专栏，面向广大同学征集稿件。你想投稿，介绍中秋节，内容包括：
1.时间
2.庆祝方式
3.意义
Step1Analysis
TheMid-autumnDaywasheldonAugust15thofthelunaryearinChina.(张欣然)Sometimes,theoldtellstoriestotheirgrandchildren.SomanykidsbelievethatthereisabeautynamedChang’EandaprettyrabbitnamedYvTuonthemoon.(张欣然)Peoplewillgettogetheronthisdaytocelebratethismeaningfulfestival.Weeatmooncakesthatlooklikearoundmoon.Inaddition,weenjoythemoonwithourfamily.（刘若彤）ThereasonwhypeoplecelebrateMid–autumnDayannuallyisthatfamiliescancommunicatewitheachother.What’smore,returninghometoaccompanyyourparentsmakesitsignificanttobuildastrongerrelationshipbetweenfamilymembers.（孙璐瑶）Step3Rewritethecomposition.(6min.)要点是否全，有无细节；
连接词使用是否恰当；
时态语态是否正确；
单词拼写是否正确；
书写是否清晰。Step5SampleMid-autumnDayisanimportanttraditionalChinesefestival.Itfallsonthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonth(the8thmonthofthelunarcalendar).
Therearemanyactivitiestocelebratethefestival.Firstofall,enjoyingdeliciousmooncakes,thewholefamilywillsittogetheratnighttoadmirethefullmoonhangingupinthesky.Inaddition,childrenoftengatheraroundtheparents,listeningtostoriesaboutChang’eandYutuwithinterest.Lastbutnotleast,nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,allmemberswilltrytocomebackhomeforreunion,whichisofgreatbenefittousphysicallyandmentally.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,celebratingthefestivalisaimedatexperiencingthetraditionalcultureandpromotingasenseofresponsibilityasaChinese.为弘扬中国传统文化，增强青少年的民族自尊感，某中学生英语杂志社开设了“中国传统节日”专栏，面向广大同学征集稿件。你想投稿，介绍重阳节（theDoubleNinthFestival），内容包括：
1.时间
2.庆祝方式
3.意义