短文改错公开课.ppt

Howtocorrectacomposition
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
学生的书面表达（文章容易理解）
语言比较简单
以简单句和并列句为主

What’sthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?Anyskills？2015年新课标全国卷Ⅰ近三年短文改错设错点
方法：运用错误检查清单
快速定位错误动词形，名词数,
还要注意形和副;
代词格，细领悟，
冠词连词常关顾；
介词短语需牢记，
习惯用法要关注.动词形，名词数,
还要注意形和副;
代词格，细领悟，
冠词连词常关顾；
介词短语需牢记，
习惯用法要关注；动词形动词形动词形名词数photos/tomatoes
trouble/advice/information/fun

paper/apaper;fish/afish
time/times;room/rooms;

payavisitto/bymeansof

高考链接：

Lotsofstudieshaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.

Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”

Finallythehardpaidoffandnowthewaterintheriveriscleanthaneverbefore.
高考链接：

Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.

Wemustfindwaystoprotectyourenvironment.

Thattookyearsofworktoreducethepollution
andcleanthewater.
高考链接：

Soonthefirefighterscameandputoutafire.

IstillrememberwhenIwaschild,youalwaysheldmeinyourarmsandtoldmestories.

Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.高考链接：

Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.

Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.

Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup,thatshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.
高考链接：

Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsitbythelakelisteningmusic.

…atthebreakfasttable,…Hetoldusthatweweregoingtotheparkbeforebreakfast.

Hepaidavisittohisgrandfatheronthenextday.
动词形，名词数,
还要注意形和副;
代词格，细领悟，
冠词连词常关顾；
介词短语需牢记，
习惯用法要关注；MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.
OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetook
oursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswe
arrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Before
waitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtoget
impatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertold
metowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpull
atthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.
Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.1.快速通读,掌握大意
MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.
OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetook
oursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswe
arrived,sowedropp