话题写作01 人物介绍篇.pptx

书面表达【话题点睛】针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对该人物的看法等方面。[要求]
(1)词数:80—100,可适当发挥(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息。
AFamousBritishNurse—FlorenceNightingale
FlorenceNightingalewasafamousBritishnurse.
【思路点拨】
1.要点提炼:主题是介绍南丁格尔的生平。文章主要围绕时间线展开。
2.确定时态:一般过去时
3.确定人称:第三人称【写作架构】【基础写作】
Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)
1.她于1820年5月12日出生在一个富有的家庭。(beborn)
SheinarichfamilyonMay12,1820.
2.她很热心并且总是乐于帮助他人,尤其是病人。(bealwaysreadytodo)
Shewaskind-heartedandhelpothers,thesick.
3.在1851年,她被训练为一名护士。(betrainedas)
In1851sheanurse.
4.后来她创办了世界上第一所护士学校。(open)
Latershetheworld'snurse.
5.在1974年,因为她给人们的爱和帮助,她的生日变成了国际护士节。(becauseof)
In1974,herbecameInternationalNurseDaythegreatloveandhelpshegavetopeople.Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)
1.Shewenttohelpinthefronthospital.Shesavedmanysoldiers'lives.(用and将两句合并为一个并列句)

2.Shecamebackafterthewar.Shebecameanationalhero.(合并为含有由when引导的时间状语从句的复合句)

3.Shewasagreatnurse.(改写为由what引导的感叹句)【连句成文】
AFamousBritishNurse—FlorenceNightingale
FlorenceNightingalewasafamousBritishnurse.
ShewasborninarichfamilyonMay12,1820.Shewaskind-heartedandalwaysreadytohelpothers,especiallythesick.In1851shewastrainedasanurse.Duringthewar,shewenttohelpinthefronthospitalandsavedmanysoldiers'lives.Whenshecamebackafterthewar,shebecameanationalhero.LaterFlorenceNightingaleopenedtheworld'sfirstnurseschool.FlorenceNightingalediedinLondonin1910.In1974,herbirthdaybecameInternationalNurseDaybecauseofthegreatloveandhelpshegavetopeople.
Whatagreatnurseshewas!拓展积累【亮点句型】
人物外貌
1.Myfavouriteteacherisa30-year-oldyoungladyofmediumheight,withbigeyesandlongstraighthair.
2.Shewearsglassesandoftengetsdressedindifferentstylesofclothes.
3.Abigsmilecanalwaysbefoundonherroundface.
4.Shealwayswearsasmile.
人物性格
1.She'ssokindandfriendlythatshemakesfriendswitheachofherstudents.
2.I'malwaysreadytohelpotherswhenthey'reintrouble.
3.Thegirlsingsanddancessowellthatsheoftengivesperformancesattheschoolparty.其他经典表达
1.Theherowonhighpraisefromthepublic.
2.Ihopeshe'llfindwaystokeepusinterestedinEnglish.
3.WhenwehaveproblemsinEnglish,wecanturntoher