（鄂尔多斯专版）中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作（十二）社会现象课件-人教版初中九年级全册英语课件.pptx

【话题点睛】以“社会现象”为话题的书面表达通常是先叙述这些社会现象,然后要求考生提出建议或者阐述自己的见解。“社会现象”话题与当今的热点结合,涉及的内容比较广泛,例如,关爱老人,关爱留守儿童,二胎政策,城乡差别等。1.Inaddition,theycanhelpeachotheraswellassharethehappinessandsadnessintheirlife.
2.Whenitwastimeforusvolunteerstoleave,theyweregratefulforourkindness.
3.It'sveryimportanttobeapersonwithgoodmannersinourdailylife.
4.Inmyopinion,weshouldkeepquietinpublic.Also,weshouldbepolitetoothers.Onlyinthiswaycanwebepersonswithgoodbehaviour.
5.Whenwewaitforabus,weshouldstandinline.6.Don'tthrowlitterorspiteverywhere.
7.Andwe'dbetternottalkorlaughloudly.
8.Befriendlytoothersandalwaysreadytohelpthepeopleinneed.
9.Ifeveryonebehaveswell,ourcitywillbemorebeautifulandmoreattractive.
10.Let'sjointogethertobecivilizedstudents!基础写作4.我们应该更加亲切地对待我们的祖父母。
Weshouldourowngrandparents.
5.学生考试作弊是不诚实的表现。
dishonestofthestudentsintheexams.假如你是李明,读完下面的故事后,表达你的看法,针对这种社会现象提至少两条建议。
Iama14-year-oldboyfromapoorvillageinFu-yang,AnhuiProvince.Likemanyotherleft-behindchildren(留守儿童)inChina,Ilivewithmygrandparentsnow.MyfatherwenttoworkinShanghaiseveralyearsago.Lastyear,mymotherwenttheretocareforhimbecausehishealthisnotasgoodasbefore.Theytellmetolistentomygrandparentsandcallmeabouttwiceamonthtoaskaboutmystudy.IreallymissmyparentsandIhopeIcanaffordtogotoschoolinShanghai.Ithinkeverychildneedsparents'loveandcare.
—WuPeigen,AnhuiProvince【思路点拨】
1.人称:本文为读后感,因此应该以第一人称的角度陈述内容;
2.时态:列举事实可以用一般过去时态,讲原因、看法应该用一般现在时;
3.提建议的句型要多样化。【写作架构】

【佳作欣赏】
IwasmovedbythestorytoldbyWuPeigenbecauseIusedtobealeft-behindchild,too.Infact,mostleft-behindchildrenarelookedafterbytheirgrandparents,whodon'tunderstandhowtocommunicatewiththechildren.Asaresult,manychildrenmaybecome“problemchildren”.Ontheotherhand,thegrandparentsaresohelplessinthechildren'sschoolwork,whichleadsthechildrentobecome“poorlearners”.
Inmyopinion,thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontothechildren.Andtheteachersshouldoftenexchangeideaswiththem.Also,theparentsshouldcalltheirchildrenmoreoften.【名师点评】
本文是针对“留守儿童”这一社会现象而写的一篇读后感。文章内容充实,思路清晰,分析问题客观深刻。A[2020·原创]
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