高考书面表达指导课件-短话长说.ppt

英语书面表达指导
1Generalstructure一、文章总体模板呈现论据时常用的连接词
…inthefirstplace,______(原因一).Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_______(原因二).Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_______(观点一).
…Somepeopleholdtheideathat_______(观点二).Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，______(原因一).Ontheotherhand,______(原因二).Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat________(观点二).
方法一:使用多种句子结构4Wecanachieveasatisfyinggradebychangingthewaywestudy.(only倒装)
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5Howshouldweprotecteyesight?Itstillremainsaquestionamongus.(主语从句)

6Weshouldemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyesight.(can’t…toomuch)
方法二:善用高级词汇3高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。
A.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclassandfeltverytired.
B.Hiswifecamebackhomeaftertheadvancedtrainingclass,feelingveryexhausted.Topic:
HowtoLengthenYourComposition

Whenitcomestotheissueof…,themajorityofpeople
seemtogetaccustomedtotheideathat…However,attitudestowards…varyfrompersontoperson.
somepeoplefirmlybelievethat…,therearesomefactors
contributingtothisattitudeasfollows,inthefirstplace,…
inthesecondplace,...Ontopofthat,…
Asamatteroffact,itisnotoftenthecase.Othershave
apreferenceof…,thereareseveralremarkablereasons.
Foronething…,foranother…
Onmypart,...方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容3.加谚语(Proverb)加谚语(Proverb)常用谚语(Proverb)人口密集地区遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）“短话长说”方法：写作任务
现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你根据以下提示写一篇文章

参考词汇：肥胖：obesity垃圾食品：junkfood
要求：1.字数150左右
2.对所有要点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
3.开头已给出，不计入总数
Recently,thephenomenonofteenobesityhasmadealotofparentsconcerned._____________________

要点分析合成文章Inordertoloseweightandstayhealthy,teensshouldavoidspendingtoomuchtimeinfrontoftheTVorthecomputeranddomoreexercise.Asthesayinggoes,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.”Theyshouldalsoeatamorebalanceddietsuchasfruits,vegetables,lessfastfoodandjunkfood.Lastbutnotleast,theyshouldmakeapropertimeschedulesothattheycanbalancetheirexerciseandstudies.
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