雅思写作优秀.docx

雅思写作优秀

2016年雅思写作优秀范文 雅思考试分听、说、读、写四个单项，每个项目单独计分，最高9分，最低0分。总分即是四个单项所得分数经过平均后，取最接近的整分或半分。口语从语言的流利度和连贯性，词汇变换，句式丰富性和语法准确性，发音四个方面评估，这四方面权重也相同。以下是yjbys网小编整理的关于雅思写作优秀范文，供大家备考。 作文一： Wearebecomingincreasinglydependentoncomputers.Theyareusedinbusinesses,hospitals,crimedetectionandeventoflyplanes. Whatthingswilltheybeusedforinthefuture?Isthisdependenceoncomputersagoodthingorshouldwehemoreauspiciousoftheirbenefits? ModelAnswer: Computersarearelativelynewinvention.Thefirstcomputerswerebuiltfiftyyearsagoanditisonlyinthelastthirtyorsoyearsthattheirinfluencehasaffectedoureverydaylife.Personalcomputerswereintroducedasrecentlyastheearlyeighties.Inthisshorttimetheyhavemadeatremendousimpactonourlives.Wearenowsodependentoncomputersthatitishardtoimaginewhatthingswouldbeliketodaywithoutthem.Youhaveonlygottogointoabankwhentheirmaincomputerisbrokentoappreciatethechaosthatwouldoccurifcomputersweresuddenlyremovedworld-wide. Inthefuturecomputerswillbeusedtocreatebiggerandevenmoresophisticatedcomputers.Theprospectsforthisarequitealarming.Theywillbesocomplexthatnoindividualcouldhopetounderstandhowtheywork.Theywillbringalotofbenefitsbuttheywillalsoincreasethepotentialforunimaginablechaos.Theywill,forexample,beabletoflyplanesandtheywillbeabletocoordinatethemovementsofseveralplanesinthevicinityofanairport.Providingallthecomputersareworkingcorrectlynothingcangowrong.Ifonesmallprogramfailsdisaster. Thereisacertaininevitabilitythattechnologywillprogressandbecomeincreasinglycomplex.Weshould,however,ensurethatwearestillinapositionwhereweareabletocontroltechnology.Itwillbealltooeasytosuddenlydiscoverthattechnologyiscontrollingus.BythenitmightbetoolateIbelievethatitisveryimportanttobesuspiciousofthebenefitsthatcomputerswillbringandtomakesurethatweneverbecometotallydependentonacompletelytechnologicalworld. 作文二： Task：Maintainingpubliclibrariesisawasteofmoneysincecomputertechnologyisnowreplacingtheirfunctions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? Sampleanswer: Theadventofcomputertechnologyhasshapedthelandscapeof