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写作的重要性6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。
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四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(TopicSentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。
基本表达
人们认为：itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat
越来越：beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof
万能理由（Omnipotence）
1.方便：convenient/convenience
2.效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3.节省和浪费：savetime/money/space;economical,thrift
wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish
4.人的心理健康：independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative
5.人的身体健康：health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6.娱乐：colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax
tired,boring,lonely
7.环境：environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8.安全和危险：safe,danger,risk
9.经验：experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety
10.人际：humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数
实例一
题目：Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途
Score:8
BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.
Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.
Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.
Score:14
BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsof