日记的写作MicrosoftPowerPoint演示文稿.ppt

文体较简单：1）Heading(日期、星期、天气)
2）Body另外，一定要注意句与句、段与段之间的连接和过渡，适当使用一些过渡词语使其连接紧凑、过渡自然。
日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以常需借助一些表示先后顺序的词语，如：
atfirst,then,lateron,afterwards,finally,atlast等。

日记写作最忌：
句式单调
记流水帐

时态欣赏：本文使用了哪几种时态？
关于“中国梦”的英语作文日记
RecentlywehadaclassmeetingonthetopicofMyChineseDream.InspiredbyPresidentXi’sChineseDream,everyonetalkedenthusiasticallyabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.
Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.Ihavealwayswantedtobeadoctor.Notonlycandoctorssavepeople’slivesbutalsotheyaredoingarespectablejob.Doctorscanalsohelppeopletoliveabetterlifewiththeirprofessionalknowledge.
Torealizemydream,Imusttrytoworkhardfromnowon.ImustlearnasmuchasIcansothatIcangetintoagoodmedicalcollege,whereIcanpreparemyselfadequatelyforthejobofadoctor.OnlyinthiswaycanIaccomplishmygoal.日记的开头：

Todayourschoolhadanopeningceremonyintheschoolauditorium.
YesterdaymyclassmatesandIwentonapicnic.

日记的结尾：
通常用一两句话告知事情的结果；或对所发
生的事进行总结或稍加议论。如：

Afterthelunchwewentdownthemountain.Wegothomeatfour,andallofusalmostgaveout.
IwasinspiredbywhathesaidandmadeupmymindtobeateacherlikeMrLiwhenIgrowup.
Imissedthefilm.ButIfelthappy.
实例欣赏1：
根据下面的提示，用英语写一则80—100字的日记。

九月十日（星期日）是教师节。这天天气晴朗。上午你参加了学校举行的庆祝会。庆祝会上有几位三十年以上教龄的老师得到了奖章。你的英语教师李老师也是其中之一。晚饭后，你和几位同学一起去看望李老师。李老师表示要将自己的有生之年献给教育事业，并鼓励你们努力学习。你深受鼓舞，决心将来也当一名象李老师那样的教师。找出文章的亮点:
时态：
所用复合句：
高级词汇：Sunday,Sept.10Fine
TodayisTeachers’Day.Inthemorning,I
attendedtheschoolcelebration,atwhich
severalteachersweregivenmedalsforhaving
completed30yearsofteaching.Mr.Li,my
Englishteacher,wasoneofthem.
AftersuppermyclassmatesandIwentto
seeMr.Li.Hesaidthathewoulddevotetherest
ofhislifetothecauseofeducation.Healso
encouragedustoworkhardatourlessons.I
wasinspiredbywhathesaidandmadeupmy
mindtobeateacherlikeMr.LiwhenIgrowup.Sunday,Sept.10Fine
TodayisTeachers’Day.Inthemorning,I
attendedtheschoolcelebration,atwhich
severalteachersweregivenmedalsforhaving
completed30yearsofteaching.Mr.Li,my
Englishteacher,wasoneofthem.
AftersuppermyclassmatesandIwent