雅思写作高分表达.doc

第六部分高分表达
优点
Aisbestcharacterizedby…特征是
Afinejournalistisbestcharacterizedbydiscipline,determinationandpenetratingobservations.
Itismanifestthat…或者Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…或者Undeniably,..★
ItismanifestthatglobalizationcanbringnumerousbenefitstothelivesofpeopleintheThird-Worldcountries.

缺点
sth.isunwarranted★★不合理的
Experimentinguponlabanimalswithouttryingtoalleviatetheirpainisunwarranted.
…isattendedby…伴随着
Thestaggeringadvancementoftechnologyisattendedbyseverepollutionoftheecosystem.
AcanbeattributedtoB★
Theproliferationoftrafficaccidentscanbeinlargemeasureattributedtothetrafficlawnotbeingstringentenough.
sth.istherootcauseof…
Thepopulationexplosionistherootcauseofwaterscarcity.
Themore…themore…
Themorevehiclesontheroads,themoretrafficcongestiontooccur.
poseathreatto…★★
Inthecontemporarysociety,theproliferationofnon-biodegradablerubbishposesathreattohumanity.
If,,,,somethingwillensue.
Ifparentsneglecttheiroffspring,lackofdisciplineandrespectwillensue(跟随出现).
attheexpenseof…以…为代价
Weshouldnotdevelopeconomyattheexpenseoftheenvironment.

享受好处
profit/benefitfrom
Peopleovertheworldcanprofitfromtheadvancementinmotorizedflight.
sth.isinthebestinterestsofsb.★
Preservingtheendangeredanimalsisinthebestinterestsofhumanity.
contributeto…
Studentsshouldnotonlylearnacademicknowledgebutalsodovolunteerworkincommunities；therebymakingcontributiontotheircities.
enablesb.todosth.★★
Culturalassimilation(同化)enablesnewly-arrivedimmigrantstogetaheadinthenewsocietysuccessfully.
sb.canutilizesth.
Inthisdayandage,manyindividualscanutilizetheInternetviacomputersormobilephones.

遭受不幸
…constitutes…
Animalexperimentation,insomecases,constitutescruelabuseoftestanimals.
beafflictedwith★遭受
Inpresent-daysociety,ahostofcountriesareafflictedwithchronicpoverty.
beaddictedto/preoccupiedwithsomething
Inpresent-daysociety,manyindividualsareaddictedto/preoccupiedwithvariousformsofgambling.
belikelytofallpreyto/bevulnerableto
Withoutproperparentalguidance,childrenareveryvulnerabletotheviolentorpornographic