Beauty on the Campus.docx

BeautyontheCampus中国作文网（www.T262.com）原创整理的>大学英语作文Itisbelievedincommonthatbeautyexistseverywhereonthecampusaslongasyouhaveaneyeforit.Somepeopleholdthatnaturalscenes,especiallyatdawn,arethemostbeautifulonthecampuswhileothersbelievethatitisintheafternoonwhentheplaygroundsarefloodedwithstudentstakingpartinsports.Inmyopinion,thebestsceneonthecampusisduringtherushhourwhenthousandsofstudentsrushtowardsthecanteen.Atpreciselythesametimeasthebellrings,somestudentsdashfromthechairs,rushingtothecanteen.Theysetthepreludetothemostattractivesceneofthewholeday.Withinafewminutes,alltheclassroomsbecomeemptyandeveryonestartstheirjourneyforlunch,onfootorbybike.Itgivespeopletheimpressionthatlunchisthemostimportantthingintheworld.Mostofthestudentsmoveatthesamespeed,withtheexceptionofseveralexcellentcyclists.Theyshuttlesmoothlyinthecrowdsjustlikefishswimmingfreelyinthesea.Onthewaytothecanteen,everyonelooksanxious.Butonceinside,alookofprideandtriumphtakesover.Sometimes,itbubblesupinmymindthattherushhourhustleandbustleistheepitomeoftheintensecompetitioninreallife.Ifyouwanttorealizeyourexpectations,youmustbearmedwithskillsandknowledge,usetimeandresourcesefficientlyandthemostimportantly,haveahealthybody.简评本文描写了校园中的一景：中午时分，学生或骑车或步行，争先恐后赶去食堂用餐的场景。值得一提的是几个动词把学生的动作描写得非常生动，如dashfromthechairs，rushingtothecanteen;shuttlesmoothlyInthecrowdsjustlikefishswimmmgfreelyinthesea等。除了动作，还有神态的.描写：在去食堂的路上，人人面露焦虑之色，而一旦走进食堂，取而代之的是alookofprideandtriumph，栩栩如生地刻画出学生当时的心情。由此，作者联想到激烈的竞争在生活中无所不在。要实现自己的理想，必须用技术和知识武装自己，有效地运用时间和资源，而且，最重要的是，要有一个健康的体魄。使文章的立意更为深刻。(点评教师：黄莺)