江苏专转本英语作文评分标准及范文模板.doc

作文评分标准2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分—基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：

PartOne背诵范文

1．观点类作文
对命运的两种看法
自己的观点
结论：命运掌握在自己的手中
MyViewonFate(命运)
Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonfate.Somepeoplethinkthatfateispredestined(注定)andnobodycanchangeit,whileothersarguethateverybodyisthemasterofhisfateandhecanchangeitwithhisownhands.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieveallmenarebornequalandnobodyisdestined(adj.注定的；命定的；去往…的
v.注定（destine的过去式和过去分词）
)toalwayssucceedorfailinhislife.Foranother,ifapersonisdiligent(adj.勤勉的；用功的，费尽心血的
)anddetermined,hewillrealizehisdreamnomatterhowpoor,humbleorunluckyhemaybe.JustthinkofNobel,whoinventeddynamiteaftercountlessexperimentsduringwhichlosthisbrotherandgotseriouslyinjuredhimself.
Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthereisnosuchthingasdestinedfateinourlife.Onlyifweholdontoourdreamcanweturnitintoreality,justasthesayinggoes,“Everybodyisthearchitectofhisownfortune.”

2．利弊类
家教的好处
家教的坏处
结论
AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofFamilyTutoring
Recentlymoreandmorepeoplebegintoengagefamilytutorsfortheirchildren.Theyarguethatfamilytutoringbringsseveraladvantages.First,familytutoringcanhelpweakstudentstokeepupwithothersinclass.Second,thesocietyisdevelopingatahighspeedandfamilytutoringcanhelpthechildmakepreparationsforthefuturecompetition.
Familytutoringalsobringsmanyproblems.Firstly,studentsmaynotwelcomefamilytutoringatallbecausemanyofthemarealreadyoverburdened.Secondly,thequalityoftheteacherandteachingremainsapotentialproblem,asthemainaimofmosttutorsistoearnmoney.Finally,thestudentmaydependtoomuchonfamilytutoringandoverlooklearningatschool.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecanseeclearlythatthedisadvantagesaremoreobvious.Teachersandparentsshouldhelpstudentsimproveefficiencybothinandoutofclass–experiencetellsusthatthebeststudentsneednofamilytutoring.

3．办法类
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