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题目：ChildrenwhogrowupinfamilieswhichareshortofmoneyarebetterpreparedtoHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/deal"\t"_blank"dealwiththeproblemsofadultlifethanchildrenwhoarebroughtupbywealthyparents.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?范文：SomefeelthatthechildrenoflowincomefamiliesarebetterHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/equipped"\t"_blank"equippedtodealwithdifficultiesposedbythe‘realworld’whentheygrowupandtheyalsobelievetheprivilegedchildrenofwealthyfamiliesarelessfittodealwiththesedifficulties.Theimplicationsandveracityofthisargumentseemself-evident,butinfactrequirecloserexamination.(58words)点评：1+1’模式，最后1句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句：butinfactrequirecloserexamination，感觉是在抛砖引玉。Thepopularwisdomisthatchildrenofpoorerfamilieslearnearlyonthevalueofabuck,andarethusHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/naturally"\t"_blank"naturallybettersuitedtostretchingmoneywhentimesgettoughinadulthood.Inversely,thechildrenofwealthyfamilies,thosebornwithasilverspoonintheirmouths,arebelievedtobecompletelyignorantofthevalueofmoney,havinghadeverythingprovidedforthemintheiryouthandoftentimeserroneouslyexpectingthesamesituationinadulthood.TheyarebelievedtobepronetooverspendingandHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/financial"\t"_blank"financialirresponsibility.Thisbelief,thoughlogical,overlooksonekeypointwhichis,ofcourse,education.(100words)点评：1’+3模式，第1句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段(即分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然4段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，把让步段放在前面，最后1句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确！Thebasisofthisargumentis,ofcourse,knowingthevalueofmoney,andtheideathatchildrenofthepoorknowthis,andthoseoftheHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/wealthy"\t"_blank"wealthydonot.Whothough,isinabetterpositiontoteachtheirchildrenthevalueofmoney;someoneskilledinearningandkeepingit,thewealthyparent,orsomeonewhocannotseemtoHYPERLINK"http://dict.hjenglish.com/w/acquire"\t"_blank"acquireit,thepoorparent?Bothwealthyandpoorchildrenareequallylikelytoacquireaneducationinmoney,w