雅思写作观点类表达得分要点.docx

雅思写作观点类表达得分要点雅思写作观点类表达得分要点论证的深度是我们斩获高分的关键。那么究竟什么样的文章能够得到考官的青睐呢?下面由yjbys小编为大家带来的雅思写作观点类表达得分要点，欢迎大家阅读与学习!首先，我们得弄清楚几个问题。1.什么是让步?从字面意义上，就是退让。我们知道有语言犀利风格著称的马薇薇在《奇葩说》里脱颖而出，她采用的最巧妙的战术其实就是------"让步"，即先退一步说话，最后"以子之矛，攻子之盾"，其实这已经就是辩论的最高境界了。同样，对于我们的.雅思大作文辩论类型的文章而言，写好让步段无疑是我们严谨的思辨思维的最好体现。2.为什么要让步?显然，第一，让步段除了增加文章的字数，完成写作任务外，更重要的是能够增强文章的客观性。通俗点来说，就是避免造成"剑走偏锋"的极端印象，论证会更加全面。第二，写得好的让步段会让考官眼前一亮，是夺取高分的制胜法宝之一。3.如何让步?下面我们以一篇范文为例，进行深度剖析。Somepeopleproposethatsmokingshouldbebannedcompletely.Whatisyouropinion?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.这篇文章的话题是关于是否彻底禁止吸烟。1)立场：不应该彻底禁止吸烟SampleAnswer1Somepeoplesuggestthatthegovernmentshouldbansmokingcompletely.Indeed,smokingisharmfultohealthanditviolatestherightsandfreedomsofnon-smokers.However,inmyopinion,smokingshouldnotbetotallybannedforthefollowingreasons.开头段：清晰地表明自己的立场First,tobaccoisacommoditytotax.(中心句1)ItcontributesmuchtotheUKgovernment'srevenue.(分论点1)Forexample,theUKgovernmentcollectsenoughfromsmokerstopayforitsentireeducationalfacilities.Ifsmokingisbanned,therewillbeagreatlosstothegovernment'sincome.Inaddition,moreserioussocialproblemswillarise,suchasunemployment,(分论点2)becausethetobaccoindustryemploysalotofworkers.主体段1：有理有据(每个分论点后都有支持句)理由：吸烟为税收作贡献，增加就业。Second,thosewhostronglyapproveofthebanlaytoomuchemphasisontherightsofnon-smokers.Theyignoresmokers'rights.(中心句2)Smokingisjustapersonalhobbyandamusementanditisakindoflifestyle.Itisastressrelieverandcanbringgreatpleasuretosmokers.Furthermore,forsmokers,nothingseemsmoredifficultandpainfulthangivingupthehabit.主体段2：同上。理由：吸烟会给吸烟者在心理上带来一定的好处。Wemustadmitthatsmokingisdetrimentaltohealth.(让步)However,theharmthatsmokingbringstopeople'shealthisexaggerated.Aslongaswesmokeinmoderation,itwillnotdogreatharmtoourhealth.Inhistory,manyfamouspeople,suchasSirWinstonChurchill,smokedandenjoyedalonglifeexpectancy.主体段3：让步段：先让步，再反驳对方。理由：指出吸烟对身体的危害性被夸大了：只要适度，吸烟不会对身体造成很大伤害。Tosumup,Idonotagreethatsmokingshould