英语高考英语作文专题讲解.ppt

高考书面表达专题(2010全国Ⅱ)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3．工作量：—每周12学时，任选三门课—担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.________________________________________________________Best,LihuaDearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.①Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.②Ifyou’dliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.③ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.④Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.⑤Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua表达正确、行文连贯观点对比类文章导入：第1段：Recentlywe’vehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshould....Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.正文：第2段：Mostofthestudentsareinfavourofit.Herearethereasons.First...Second...Finally...第3段：However,theothersarestronglyagainstit.Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace...What’smore...Inaddition...结论：第4段：Personallyspeaking,theadvantagesoverweighthedisadvantages,foritwilldousmoreharmthangood,soIsupportit.书写工整、字数要够、1、汉语式思维Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、谓语缺失Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.4、谓语动词用法出错Hedressedinanewcoat.5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.6、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.7、分数与百分数作主语Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容词、副词混用