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剑桥雅思9写作(全)范文预览(1)－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－目前剑桥雅思9已经在英国上市请购买正版,查看更多细内容节ModelandsampleanswersforWritingtasksTEST1,WRITINGTASK1SAMPLEANSWERThisisananswerwrittenbyacandidatewhoachievedaBand7score.Hereistheexaminer’scomment:Thisanswerclearlypresentsthekeyfeaturesofthediagrams,andalthoughthefirstmapisdescribedonlybriefly,thisisacceptableforthisparticulartask.Thedescriptionisaccuratethoughsomeaspects,suchasthesectionontheaccommodation,couldhavebeenmorefullyextended.Thefinalparagraphsummarisesthemainpointseffectively.Theinformationislogicallyorganisedandcanbeeasilyfollowedthroughouttheresponse.Arangeofcohesivedevicesincludingreferenceandsubstitutionisusedappropriately,withonlyoccasionalinaccuracies.Somelesscommonvocabularyandcollocationsareusedappropriately,e.g.centralreceptionblock;westernaccommodationunits,andtherearenospellingerrors.Thereisavarietyofgrammaticalstructuresandmanysentencescontainnoinaccuracies.Whereerrorsdooccur,theydonotaffectunderstanding.Thetwomapsshowthesameislandwhilefirstoneisbeforeandthesecondoneisaftertheconstructionfortourism.Lookingfirstattheonebeforeconstruction,wecanseeahugeislandwithabeachinthewest.Thetotallengthoftheislandisapproximately250metres.Movingontothesecondmap,wecanseethattherearelotsofbuildingsontheisland.Therearetwoareasofaccommodation.Oneisinthewestnearthebeachwhiletheotheroneisinthecentreoftheisland.Betweenthem,thereisarestaurantinthenorthandacentralreceptionblock,whichissurroundedbyavehicletrack.Thistrackalsogoesdowntothepierwherepeoplecangosailinginthesouthseaoftheisland.Furthermore,touristscanswimnearthebeachinthewest.Afootpathconnectingthewesternaccommodationunitsalsoleadstothebeach.Overall,comparingthetwomaps,therearesignificantchangesafterthisdevelopment.Notonlylotsoffacilitiesarebuiltontheisland,butalsotheseaisusedforactivities.Thenewislandhasbecomeagoodplacefortourism.ModelandsampleanswersforWritingtasks目前剑桥雅思9已经在英国上市请购买正版,查看更多细内容节TEST3,WRITINGTASK1SAMPLEANSWERThisisananswerwrittenbyacandidatewhoachievedaBand