详解托福写作首段的重要性.docx

详解托福写作首段的重要性比如：见光死系列Withthedevelopmentofsocietyandeconomy，moreandmorechildrenspendmoreandmoretimeoncomputerplayingmoreandmore.Somepeoplewhoarestronglyagainstitthinkthatithasnegativeeffectsonthembothphysicallyandmentally.Inmyopinion，Ithinkthatchildrenshouldnotplaycomputer，theyneedchooseothergames.名师讲解如何写好开头这就是传说中的见光死开头!首段又臭又长，不是说不能写长，而是空有长度，没有内容，考官看完会直接傻掉。很多同学喜欢写withthedevelopmentofsocietyandeconomy这样的开头，其实写过作文的人就知道，这是典型的中式思维模式在作怪。英国人的思维方式和我们不同，他们重视细节，讲究单刀直入，所以开头的废话连篇会直接让考官感到反感，恶心，进而影响整篇文章的分数。还有那个经典的moreandmore，重复太多明显缺乏词汇量。下面是托福写作的优秀范文：Itendtoagreethatyoungchildrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchtimespentonthecomputereveryday.Thisispartlybecausesittinginfrontofascreenfortoolongcanbedamagingtoboththeeyesandthephysicalpostureofayoungchild，regardlessofwhattheyareusingthecomputerfor.这个开头就非常符合英国人的口味，不但开头没有任何废话和空洞的内容，相反，句子充满务实，具体的风格，而且，开头的最后一句话是对中间段落的一点提示，有过渡的作用。托福写作素材模板：《老友记》托福写作常用素材考生应该平时注意积累，关于《老友记》话题的模板素材，非常适合托福备考考生，小编和大家分享一下!素材段落AsoneofthemostsuccessfulTVseries,Friendshasproducedaphenomenalimpactoncultureandentertainment.EventheproducersofthissitcomdidnotexpectthatitwouldbecomeasymbolofAmericanpopculturewhentheywereoriginallyjusttryingtotellasimplestoryofsixyoungpeoplelivinginaloftinNewYork.ThetenseasonsofFriendsdepictthemostimportanttenyearsinthelivesofthesemaincharacters.Theywentthroughupsanddownsintheircareersandliveswhiletheunchangedthemeduringthetenyearswasthefriendshiptheyhadforoneanother.Inadditiontotheirpreciousrelationships,thisTVshowalsoillustratesthelivingstatusofyoungpeople,whichhassignificantlyinfluencedthewaypeopletalkandcommunicateallaroundtheworld.单词和词组phenomenal巨大的、杰出的=remarkable,exceptionalphenomenaldevelopmentupsanddowns起伏=successesandfailuresUpsanddownsaretobeexpectedinlife,butthatdoesnotmakethedownpartsanyeasier.话题词汇观众audience大众文化交流exchangeofpopularculture引起大众的关注catchthepublicattention媒体报道mediacoverage肥皂剧soapopera喜剧comedy悲剧tragedy情景喜剧sitcom谈话类节目talkshow