10天搞定托福写作.docx

10天搞定托福写作托福写作避免生搬硬套，要把学到的句式和词组灵活运用到自己的写作当中去!这样，写作的分数自然也就提高啦!增加过渡段：A1好。。。A1好，而且A2好。(这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充)A2好。。。14条万能理由：与事物有关：效率、方便、经济、耐久、安全、空间。与人有关：健康、乐趣、成就、性格、情感、交流、经验、他人。理由的安排也要有逻辑顺序—首段要雕琢，要表现!1、排比反问：HaveyoueverbeentotheWestLakeinHangzhouCity?HaveyoueverwalkedalongtheLongCorridorintheSummerPalace?HaveyoueverseentheredfallenleavesontheFragranceHill?Ifyouhaveneverhadsuchexperiences,youwouldneverknowhowmuchfunoutdooractivitiescouldbringyou.2、背景知识式：Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorecompanies(includinginternationalcompaniesandsmallcompanies)arefounded,buttherearenotenoughpeopletotakethesepositions.Soalargenumberofworkingopportunitiesareprovidedtopeoplewhoarestillteenagerstudents.Insomecountries,somepeoplethinkifteenagersdoajobwhiletheyarestillstudyinginschool,itmayhaveabadimpactontheirgrade.Othersconsiderthatteenagersshouldhavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatter.Becauseteenagerscanlearnamountofusefulexperiencethroughworkingandtheythinkthroughthejobtheywillacquiresomeknowledgeofhowtogetagoodrelationshipwithothers.3、定义式：Technologyreferstoskills,knowledge,andtechniquesthathumanbeingsuseintheirdailylifeandwork.Aseverybodymayfind,technologydevelopsdaybyday.Howdoesthedevelopmentoftechnologyaffectourlife?Manypeopleholdtheopinionthatitisduetothedevelopmentoftechnologythathumanbeingshaveaccesstothecomfortablemodernlife.Ontheotherhand,anumberofpeoplearealwaysawareofallkindsofdestructiveinfluenceofthetechnologicaldevelopmentonus.AsfarasIamconcerned,thedevelopmentoftechnologydoesfarmoregoodthanharmtopeople’shappiness.正文部分每段安排：1~3行主题句4~8行细节论述1~2行主题再现主题句的要求：1、要有概括性：Eg-.WhenIworkindaytime,otherpeoplearealsoworking,soIcanworkmoreefficiently.Eg+.Outsideenvironmentduringdaytimehelpstopromoteefficiencyinmanyways.解说：TS一定要概括，不要写成反例那样那么细节，不然后面的话不好展开了。2、避免绝对化：Eg-.Elderpeopleareefficient.Eg+.Comparedwithmanyun-experiencedyoungpeople,mostexperiencedelderscanworkmoreefficiently.解说：正例表述得体，尺度很好，有限定成分“most”，有对比说法“comparedwith”等。3、避免语法和用词错误。细节