【英语】高考备考英语满分作文赏析.docx

精选可编辑PS：本资料由逗你学拾掇供应，我们的目标是用最小的力气深造！网页搜索：使用市廛搜索：逗你学或者扫描下方收看免费的知识点视频，3分钟提高50分！高考现实上可以更复杂高考备考高考英语总分值作文赏析(背诵佳选)★一.用词精确;表达地道【北京卷高考英语】【试题回放】第一节情况作文(20分)美国中教师jeff将要来你所在的红星中学深造中文，经协商安排住在你家。假定你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照以下列图次第介绍他来中国后的生活安排。留心：1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数非常多于60。DearJeff,I’mHuafromBeijingHongxingMiddleSchool.I’mveryhappytolearnthatyou’regoingtostaywithmyfamilywhileyou’reinBeijing.Whileyouarehere,we’llprovideyouwitharoomofyourownwithabed,adesk,acoupleofchairsandaTV.You’llalsohaveyourownbathroom.Ourschoolisquiteclosetoourhome,sowecouldgotoschooltogetherbybike.Atnoonwe’lleatattheschooldininghall.I’msureyou’lllikethedeliciousChinesefoodthere,andenjoytalkingwithfriendsoverlunch.Classesinourschoolusuallyfinishat4intheafternoon.Youcanthenjoinotherstudentsinplayingballgamesorswimming.It’llbealotoffun.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorrequests,pleaseletmeknow.We’lltryourbesttomakeyourstayhereinBeijingapleasantexperience.Bestwishes,LiHua[名师点评]这篇文章的特征仍然比较明晰的，第一，作者按照图画将文章的要点归结综合残缺，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文不采用华丽的辞藻，但用词特不适当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。【安徽卷高考英语】【试题回放】假定你是李华，美国一所友好黉舍准备与你们黉舍共同创办一份中教师英文刊物，该校格林教师来信询征询有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假定你是李华，美国一所友好黉舍准备与你们黉舍共同创办一份中教师英文刊物，该校格林教师来信询征询有关情况。请你给她写封回信，要紧内容如下：★表示赞同。★提出你喜欢的栏目。★l简明说明因由。留心：1.词数100左右。2.新的开头跟开头已为你写好。3.适当增加细节，以使行文衔接。4.参考栏目：栏目—columnDearMr.Green,Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazinetogether.Thatsoundsgreat!AndIdefinitelyagreewithyouonthat.Someofthecolumnswhichyoumentionedintheletterarereallymycupoftea.Say,“cultureexpress〞givesusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,it’snecessarytolearnfromeachother.Thiswillofferawonderfulchance.Apartfromthat,“blurtout〞isprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimproveoralEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,“entertainment〞issocool!Thepopularsingers,actorsandcelebritiesaresocatchyandattractivethatyouabsolutelycan’tmissit!Teenagersarejustfondofthetrendythings.Well,Ican’tlistmore.Ireallycan’twaittoreadthatmagazine!Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【名师点评】这是一篇总分值作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇