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Mainsections1.Howtowriteacoverletter2.TheinformationsinaCoverLetterDr.ShengliRenDepartmentofPhysics,QinghuaUniversity83ShuangqingRoad,HaidianDistrictBeijing100083,PRChinaEmail:Tel:Fax:July18,2015DearEditor:Thisisamanuscriptentitled“InternationalvisibilityofChinesescientificjournals”byShengliRenandRonaldRousseau.Itissubmittedtobeconsideredforpublicationasan“Article”inyourjournal.Allauthorshavereadandapprovedthisversionofthearticle,andduecarehasbeentakentoensuretheintegrityofthework.Neithertheentirepapernoranypartofitscontenthasbeenpublishedorhasbeenacceptedelsewhere.Itisnotbeingsubmittedtoanyotherjournal.大家应该也有点累了，稍作休息3.ThingsYouShouldNeverMentionExamplesMainsectionFollow-upCorrespondence（催稿信）MainsectionRevisedManuscript(稿件退修)Includeapointbypointresponsetothereviewers’commentsandhighlightthechangesyouhavemade.Trytomakeyourargumentconvictivebycitingimportantreferences.Responsetothereviewers’commentsonmanuscript#TA-ART-04-2015-002817Wearegratefultotherefereesforexaminingourpaper.Aftercarefullyconsideringthereferees’commentswehaverevisedthepaper.Thefollowingdetailsourresponsetothereferees’comments.Referee1Recommendation:Idonotunderstandtheideasbehindthecalculations.Fig1aindicatesaprotonwhichmustcomefromtheelectrolyte,andalsoanelectron,whichmustcomefromtheexternalcircuit.Response:WefindthattheoriginalFig.1(a)failstodepicttheVolmerreactionprocessproperly.Electronsactuallymigratewithinthematerial,ratherthanfromtheelectrolytetothematerialsurface.WethereforerevisethefiguresoastoexplicitlyshowtheprocessofelectrontransportationtoasurfaceSsitefollowedbyaprotonadsorption.InFig.1bandthediscussiononp.2electronandprotontransferaretreatedasseparatesteps.Infact,theyoccursimultaneouslyorconcerted.ThereforeatleastsurfaceIIinFig.1bmakesnosense.Also,Ihavenoideawhatismeantbythecoordinateinthisplot.Response:Wedon’tthinkelectronandprotontransferoccursimultaneously.Infact,protonsaremorelikelytoadsorbonanionsornegativelychargedsystems,becausetheyhavelargerprotonaffinitiesandcanreleasemoreheat