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高考英语满分作文 第一篇：高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数：100左右：2.参考词汇：房租-Tent（n.）。I'mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter，andI'mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet，whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere，anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms，oneofwhichisbedroom，theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed，asofa，adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat，andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish，butI'lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough，writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon！Allthebest！Yours，LiHua满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，'引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。DearBob，WelcometoChina！Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere'rethreeroomsinit：abedroom，akitchen，andabathroom.Thereisabed，asofa，adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast，willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive？ThenI'Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport，seeyou.Bestwishes！Yours，LiHua满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。DearBob，Howareyouthesedays？I'msogladtoknowthatyou'llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast，willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive？ThenI'Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport，seeyou.Bestwishes！Yours，LiHua满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。DearBob，Howareyouthesedays？I'msogladtoknowthatyou'llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI'vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It'sjustones